and copied from the jamboard here is mine
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 Student, and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, November 4, 2021
My writing
13 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Your planning for your writing was great. Lets work together to recraft and add those wonderful ideas in to your writing. Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteHello Ethen.
ReplyDeleteOne day I might look into playing Fortnite.There are a lot of children at school, who talk about this game.
Just remember that proper nouns need capital letters-Fortnite is a proper noun
I am looking forward to reading your next post Ethen.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading your next post Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI hope you have a wonderful last week of school Ethen :)
ReplyDeleteHave a great holiday Ethen.
ReplyDeleteHello Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI was just checking to see if there was any new post.
Have a wonderful holiday and I will check your blog soon.
Hello Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI hope that your holidays are going well.
Did you have fun at Riccarton today?
Have a great week :)
Hello Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI just thought I would check to see if you had completed any new SLJ activity.
I hope your holidays are going well.
Good afternoon Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI hope you are having a wonderful holiday.
I was just checking to see if there was any new post.
Take care :)
Hello Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI just thought I would have a look to see if there was any new post that you might have added.
Have a wonderful week :)
I hope you are looking forward to staring back at school next week Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to hearing about how your little brother and sister are :)