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Thursday, November 4, 2021

My writing


                      in room 11   we have been doing jamboard Insted we had our jamboard open 

                           and copied from the jamboard here is mine
                         


13 comments:

  1. Your planning for your writing was great. Lets work together to recraft and add those wonderful ideas in to your writing. Ka pai!

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  2. Hello Ethen.
    One day I might look into playing Fortnite.There are a lot of children at school, who talk about this game.

    Just remember that proper nouns need capital letters-Fortnite is a proper noun

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  3. I am looking forward to reading your next post Ethen.

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  4. I look forward to reading your next post Ethen.

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  5. I hope you have a wonderful last week of school Ethen :)

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  6. Hello Ethen.
    I was just checking to see if there was any new post.
    Have a wonderful holiday and I will check your blog soon.

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  7. Hello Ethen.
    I hope that your holidays are going well.
    Did you have fun at Riccarton today?
    Have a great week :)

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  8. Hello Ethen.
    I just thought I would check to see if you had completed any new SLJ activity.
    I hope your holidays are going well.

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  9. Good afternoon Ethen.
    I hope you are having a wonderful holiday.
    I was just checking to see if there was any new post.
    Take care :)

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  10. Hello Ethen.
    I just thought I would have a look to see if there was any new post that you might have added.
    Have a wonderful week :)

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  11. I hope you are looking forward to staring back at school next week Ethen.
    I look forward to hearing about how your little brother and sister are :)

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