On your mark, get set bang! I start with jumping over the hurdles then I go through the fish,
number 33 is right behind me so I run as fast as I can . I am on my last legs then I win
the race.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 Student, and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
On your mark, get set bang! I start with jumping over the hurdles then I go through the fish,
number 33 is right behind me so I run as fast as I can . I am on my last legs then I win
the race.
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it feel like im in the store you made
ReplyDeleteYou have a quality piece of writing with good ideas and great punctuation. Ka pai.
ReplyDeleteYou almost won the race Ethen.You see,there was a little fish that bet you.I know this because I was the little fish.I had orange and white scales.You might not of seen me because I have been swimming for ages looking for my family.My name is Nemo..I WIN!
ReplyDeleteor can only people win the race?.
Good morning Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI hope all is going well for you and the family.I hope that you are having some fun time and enjoying the beautiful sunshine.
Take care.Hopefully we will be back at school next week :)
Good morning Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI hope all is going well for you and your family.
Take care and keep warm.
Have a great week Ethen.I am looking forward to hearing how your little brother and sister are doing.
ReplyDeleteTake care and keep warm.
I hope all is going well for you and the family Ethen.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to see what you have been working on Ethen.
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend and I hope all is well with the family.
How was your first day back at school Ethen?.
ReplyDeleteI had fun playing non stop cricket at lunch time.